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Summer Rain by ~Nynae:iconNynae:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


He held himself high,
suspended in atmosphere
so thick with Summer heat
that when finally insistant winds tugged him free,
he fell with great joy
to patter gently on verdant faces.

The Clouds rumbled their approval,
their peels of laughter lending strength
to other would-be flyers, nervous first-timers.
They fell upon wide embracing arms,
drenching their ardent lovers
in seemingly endless volleys.
©2007-2009 ~Nynae
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Author's Comments

I know I skipped spring, but seeing as how I haven't experienced it yet this year, I hope you'll forgive me. Missouri welcomed us home with a beautiful thunderstorm.

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:icongaelyia:
~Gaelyia Jun 23, 2007, 6:22:34 PM
I've made a very important decision.

I love all of your writings. You really know how to use words to paint a scene or a feeling, and you do it concisely, which gives a great impact.

Make a book.

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"Nobody realizes that some people expend tremendous energy merely to be normal." - Albert Camus

=TreesClub ~virgo-club
:icononebardmojo:
*onebardmojo Jun 23, 2007, 9:12:29 PM
I love this one the best! Especially this:
"The Clouds rumbled their approval,
their peels of laughter lending strength
to would-be flyers, nervous first-timers."
Swoon, lady! You're making me swoon!

--
Love is stronger than death. (Robert Fulghum)
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~violetsorceress Jun 24, 2007, 6:23:40 AM
I like it! The imagery and succinctness are wonderful. It's amazing how you can use so few words to express so much.
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~Sardaug Jun 24, 2007, 10:51:50 AM
Marvelous personification. *ponders what it feels like to leave the comfort of home and plummet headlong into an entirely new experience* Brava!
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~Nynae Jun 24, 2007, 10:39:06 PM
Aww! Thank you! :hug: Did you ever go to summer camp?

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The mind has the ability to reshape itself.
:iconnynae:
~Nynae Jun 24, 2007, 10:40:22 PM
I made you swoon *waggle*

*loves* Thank you, booful!

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The mind has the ability to reshape itself.
:iconnynae:
~Nynae Jun 24, 2007, 10:48:15 PM
Dude Jennifer, you totally just made me blush. Wow... thank you so much! :hug:

I wouldn't know the first thing about book-making, though. I couldn't hold a candle to the truly great poets. I'll just stick to reading them!

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The mind has the ability to reshape itself.
:iconnynae:
~Nynae Jun 24, 2007, 10:48:52 PM
:hug: thank you! I've always admired your work from afar, so it means a lot to hear you say that!

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The mind has the ability to reshape itself.
:icongaelyia:
~Gaelyia Jun 25, 2007, 12:49:32 AM
If nothing else.... [link]

Make your own books online. They print, bind, ship.

Of course you'll need enough writings. ;) Or pictures and writings. But maybe one day when you feel like you have a good collection, you'll do it. It'll be great.

--
"Nobody realizes that some people expend tremendous energy merely to be normal." - Albert Camus

=TreesClub ~virgo-club
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